Key features of the writing workshop with students Teaching Focus: adding further detail. 1. ASK students what great writers do. Note their ideas with icons on board. This is your shared success criteria ( see example from TKI ). 2. SHARE writing. Ask PEERS TO GIVE FEEDBACK (e.g. one great thing). 3. ASK students what their next step is (using icons and success criteria). Exemplars to guide my instruction - Standard after One Year At School http://literacyonline.tki.org.nz/Literacy-Online/Impact/Progress-and-achievement/Assessment-processes/National-Standards-Reading-and-Writing/National-Standards-illustrations My use in class I tried Murray's approach the following day. We looked at one child's work from the previous day. His teaching focus was adding details. Children were able to tell me that great writers: * Think of a story (and plan it - either in head or with a picture) * Say and hear the sounds * Count out the words in their story * Use finger spaces * R...